Here is our third draft! We have added in the voice over with the background music and we have decided on the font for our titles, which we said we would do by today!
However, after hearing the feedback from our class, the A2 media class and Miss Foster, we have decided to take the advice on board, change the order of our shots, and cut a few bits out. We think this new order might work a bit better, because our film title currently comes in at 1:53 which is really late, and our new order works to have our title come in at around 1:00.We are also trying to get as close to 2 minutes as possible, so cutting a few bits out is probably necessary.
After today we have to change the order of our shots, resynchronize and alter the music, make the name titles bigger, and cut a few bits out. We remain hopeful that this wont take too long!
Here is a picture of some rough notes, detailing what we picked up from our feedback:
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